Monday, May 7, 2012

Intro to Portfolio/about me


Letter to Myself
Dear Future Skyler,
Hey there boy. I am writing a letter to my future self. I will be able to open this in the fall of 2012. The purpose of this letter is to inform my future self about the things I learned in the wonderful and beautiful Professor Mutti’s English course. When writing an essay some things to consider are rhetoric and exigence. Skyler, how you could you forget rhetoric? It is the effective use of language to persuade, inform, or educate. Sound a bit more familiar? That’s because you use rhetoric more than you think, for example when trying to get things to swing your way, or talking to a girl. Now exigence is also very important. It is the problem that is impacted through the writing. So for easier terms to understand, it is the subject of which you are writing.
Writing is an easy task, when given allotted time and applying the various writing techniques that have been taught through this course. How could anyone forget to use logos, ethos and pathos? Logos is for the logic, Ethos is to prove credibility, and pathos is to appeal to the viewer’s emotions. With all this is your tool belt of writing Skyler, you should be able to conquer some essays easily right?
            

Reflective Introduction


The Milestone
            Milestone, as defined by dictionary.com, an action or event marking a significant change or stage in development. I would like to represent my online portfolio as a milestone. In the milestone there are essays that I have written. I truly believe I have grown as a writer, not only after the first English 114A class, but the extended English 114B.
            One of the essays that is in the milestone is the Whale Rider essay. I felt like I hit my stride in this essay. I used proper citation and an annotative bibliography, which was my first real time using this. I also used quotes from the book in the essay and I paraphrased a lot.
            The other essay in the milestone is the project space essay. It is about college universities and what people and things take up the space in them. I talk about how school presidents and chancellors are making six figure incomes while students are struggling and trying to get classes so desperately so they can only hope to graduate with their degree. I used a lot of rhetoric in this essay. I was very persuasive and also I was speaking to an audience of college students and teachers, playing off their emotions and values so this ties also into the effect of using pathos. Exigence is also another tool used, I was talking about the problems of a university.
            All in all I feel like I have grown as a writer and scholar, through this two part English course. All of the essays only helped to make me achieve more as a student and put what I have learn to good use in academia and in the real world.

Thursday, May 3, 2012

In Class Essay


                Earlier in the week a public fight in a Burger king erupts between a young married couple. Now in a fight that is in front of people, it is normal for people around the argument to look and be interested in what is happening. However, it is unethical to take a very uncomfortable situation and capture the moment in a photo, tweet dialogue, and video clips. It is obviously a low-point in their life, now why would someone post it.
                Andy Boyle, who is a newsroom developer for the Boston Globe, took the reins on making this situation available to cyberspace. Boyle reportedly tweeted all about the fight, took pictures that could potentially identify the couple, and a video. Boyle has done nothing wrong in this situation. He has not broken any rules or laws. However, it is not ethical how he acted on this situation.
                It is made clear that Boyle has not broken rules. Anupam Chander, a professor of law at UC Davis says and confirms, that there was nothing wrong. Chander states, “In general, if something is happening in a public place, you can film it and take pictures of it and make it available to the world.” Now when I see this statement I think of a riot happening, a bomb scare, or a celebration of some sort. All three of those examples should rightly be placed on the news, but not something like an already embarrassing fight.
                I feel as capable as anyone to say that it is unethical what Boyle did. I know he did not commit a crime but it is still wrong. In a public social environment it is already uncomfortable for the bystanders. It is also very apparent that uneasiness has plagued the sobbing wife. Now why would someone want to publicize this? My experience with something along the lines of this are one of my classmates was homosexual and he came out of the closet in class, people posted about it on facebook and everything. The boy was so sad and felt betrayed and rightfully so. His feelings were broken and hurt, the scenario examined in this essay was still in a more anonymous public platform, but if Boyle’s tweets were popular enough, they could have been televised on the news. Which would not be ethical toward the fighting couple.
                All in all, what Boyle did is technically not wrong. However looking at this from a socialized perspective I believe that it is unethical to tweet, post pictures and video, about a couple fighting. It is obviously a low point in said relationship, so why does someone have to post this. What Boyle did was wrong, with the intent to share and remind all about the incident.

Whale Rider Essay


Whale Rider Essay
           


           What qualities represent a good leader? Is it unbearable strength, or perhaps unbreakable courage? A leader should be someone who will take guides their people in the right direction and with care. A leader must be able to trust their followers. In the Maori tradition, the leader is traditionally a man. The only person left in the true blood line after Koro Apirana, (the current leader,) is Kahu. Kahu is Apirana’s granddaughter. She is a stubborn little girl who is always getting in to trouble. She is curious and wants to learn about the culture, and also partake in traditionally boy activities. Kahu’s position she is in is clearly plagued with a disadvantage, the Maori people are discouraged to have a girl leader about to take the crown, but she exhibits good leadership qualities and also can communicate with the whales. Although she is not the gender of a traditional chief, Kahu represents strength and desire in the Maori culture.
Koro Aprina is a man that is very knowledgeable about the Maori culture and traditions. He is a man cemented in tradition. Koro is the grandfather to Kahu, the heir to the Maori tribe leadership. The tradition in Maori culture is to have a male as the leader of the tribe. He is afraid that his people are forgetting the ways of the Maori and are adopting too much western influence. This makes him become very particular and knit-picky about tradition. He is not happy that the throne is going to be passed on to his granddaughter, which of whom is named after first whale rider of the New Zealand people.  The leader is traditionally supposed to be a male, but the only one left in the true bloodline Koro’s granddaughter Kahu. Koro is upset and fears the fact that the tradition must be broken when Kahu takes the role. He is stubborn in his ways and even is fighting with his wife for the sake of “saving” the Maori culture. His intentions are good he just does not want to tarnish tradition by handing leadership to a female. His distrust in her really makes her seem like she is not strong. If her grandfather does not trust her then she cannot display her strength because he will just immediately shun the fact of her giving him an example of fortitude.
Kahu is trying to learn the ways of a Maori and her grandfather keeps on shunning her off and getting mad. He would always say, “She is no good to me.” Even when Kahu is learning to spar with the fighting sticks Koro immediately yells at her and scolds her. All of these put downs, and constant public humiliations, by her grandfather would normally discourage a girl, but instead it doesn’t faze her and she becomes even stronger. The Maori people are warriors, and it is said that the leader must be a strong warrior. Kahu may not be an actual warrior leading people into battles but metaphorically speaking she is a strong warrior. I say this because she is in a constant battle to show her grandfather that he will not let him down, or the people of the tribe.
All leaders must prove themselves. Kahu has a big bite to swallow if she wants to prove her worth to her grandfather Koro Apirana. A quality that a leader must exhibit very well is to never give up, and she never does. Even after Koro would bark commands at her and scolds she was never shook. In chapter 17 of the book, The Whale Rider, Kahu puts her strength to the test. There are a bunch of beached whales and she is trying to get them back in the water.
This is the true test. She is named after the first and only legendary whale rider. Kahu must prove her worth to her people and to Koro. She spends time with one particular whale who seems to be the leader. She starts to realize that the whale represents Koro and the tradition, if she saves the whale then her grandpa will still be around and tradition can still live, but if she fails and the whale dies then so will Koro and the Maori tradition. She is whispering to the whale almost trying to talk it back into going back to the sea, and she eventually kicks it and it starts to begin to wake up from its dazed state and go back into the water. “As it did so, the younger whales came to push their leader into deeper water. “Let the people live,” she ordered. Together, the ancient whale and its escort began to swim into the deep ocean. She was going, our Kahu. She was going into the deep ocean. I could hear her small piping voice in the darkness as she left us. She was going with the whales into the sea and the rain. She was a small figure in a white dress, kicking at the whale as if it were a horse, her braids swinging in the rain. Then she was gone and we were left behind,” (W. Ihimaera 130) Kahu finally proved herself, she rescued the whales and she saved the day.
At the end of the novel Koro really tells Kahu how he actually feels. “’I fell off the whale. If I were a boy, I would have held on tight. I’m sorry, Paka, I’m not a boy.’ The old man cradled Kahu in his arms, partly because of emotion and partly because he didn’t want those big ears out there to hear their big chief crying. ‘You’re the best great-grandchild in the whole wide world,’ he said. ‘Boy or girl, it doesn’t matter.’ We see that Koro has accepted Kahu and now Kahu can really lead her people, with the attained strength, courage, and given consent from Koro.
Constantly over the book we are proved to by Kahu that she is a good leader. She exemplifies good leadership qualities and represents with honor. In Maori culture the leader must be a male, and must be a warrior leader, ready to lead his warrior people, but Kahu is the only remaining true heir. So Kahu breaks tradition but is qualified to do so. We see how she is stubborn but set in her ways. This will help prove to the audience that later on she will be protecting the culture and keeping tradition alive. Next it is clear to see that she is named after the first and only whale rider of the tribe. There are even whales that are beached that she helps back into the water near the end of the novel. Koro is along the beach in the shallow water along with more of his people, but they are all struggling and failing to return the whales into the water so they can survive. She rides one back into the ocean, just another display of her strength and courage. Despite Koro’s harsh and demanding relationship with Kahu, never letting her join in on the boy traditional teachings, and all the times that he scolded Kahu, she ends up proving her worth to the old leader.
Work Cited
Ihimaera, Witi. “The Whale Rider.” Harcourt Books 2003. Print. This book is about a girl Kahu, who is the heir to the Maori throne. She is consistently butting heads with her grandfather, Koro Apirana, who is the current leader of the people. This is a tale of strength and courage how Kahu has to overcome her grandfathers put-downs and try and show people to look past gender and just see the great leadership qualities she has.
“Maori”, People, Culture & Traditions. Web. 12 Apr. 2012. <http://www.themaori.com/> . Is filled with facts about everything that is Maori. It takes us in depth about the Maori tradition, culture, lifestyles and more. It also gives a detailed background and story of how the people landed on the island of New Zealand.
“New Zealand Culture – Maori.” New Zealand Travel and New Zealand Business. Web. 12 Apr. 2012. http://www.newzeleand.com/int/article/new-zealand-culture-maori/. This website is more of a pop culture look at the Maori tradition, culture, lifestyles and more. It is an examination of the atmosphere in the Maori culture.
            

Project Space


Project Space
             Universities contain a very colorful and large population. When one looks at a commuter school, such as California State University, Northridge, it is clear to see that it is the most diverse scene around. Educational spaces employ a diverse staff of faculty and staff as well as a student body. Everyone has a different social status at the school; there are also a lot of different groups formed amongst the student body. Not only are groups formed and categorized amongst the student body, but there are also groups formed by the staff of the school. The space on campus is occupied by many, many different things. There are workers, student body, the staff, the buildings, and the food places on campus. Each one of these categories is individual and they all have meaning.
            Two of the groups that carry the most weight on their back are the students and the staff. In the group of the students, it is a large population all attending the school for the reason to get a degree, gain more intelligence in a certain field, and to graduate. The staff is made up of the teachers, workers, and the ones higher up. All of the staff are divided by what power they hold, and how much money they are making at the time. A question to ask oneself is, “Is it right to have so many students working towards getting a degree, while raising tuition and the classes they need are becoming harder and harder to obtain a seat in, while the chancellor and the school president are making a six-figure income?”
            The enrollment at CSUN has been moving up and down. In 1997 the amount of students was 170,748. In 2001, enrollment rose about 44,000. Now it is evening out at about 190,000 (csun.edu). This shows us that more people are going to school than they were in the 1990’s. This shows us that due to our economy becoming weaker and weaker, more people are striving to attend a university. Attending a university gives hope that with a degree after 4 years, that person will be making more money than someone who attended a city college; or no college at all. An issue that is brought to the table with this is that students are trying to make the best opportunity they can for themselves. The youth are paving their way for success by attending college, however, many people after they graduate are still working hard to pay off college loans, and debts that they have accumulated over their time at a university. The struggles continue for a student while the budgets are cut for all California State Universities, and also when California State University, Northridge gets struck with more and more cuts.
In December 2011, the CSU system announced that it will slash an additional $100 million from its general budget. This came after a $650 million reduction, as a result of lower-than-projected state revenues. More budget cuts come barreling our way to hit Cal State University Northridge as the California State University system-wide cut the funding to only $2 billion—a 27 percent reduction from 2010. This is an issue that needs to be raised, as the president of the school and the chancellor are raking in a six-figure income, the students are finding more and more tuition raises, budget cuts, dropped classes, and capacity enrollment.
To compensate for the cuts, six California State Universities over-enrolled students for the Fall 2011 semester. California State University Northridge over-enrolled the most students. The California State University system administration is threatening to withhold an additional $7 million from the campus if it doesn’t partly roll back enrollment by 2,800 students for the current spring semester.
In response to the mandatory enrollment rollback, CSUN announced a cap on the number of credits most students can carry, which will be enforced during the current add-drop period. Except for graduating seniors and a few other groups, that will mean no more than 15 units per student, per semester. This hinders the performance of students that wish to graduate quicker by taking more than 15 units, which is no longer allowed.
At California State University, Northridge there are groups divided amongst the students. There are the athletes, who are easily spotted out by wearing casual sweat-suit attire and sporting a red backpack. There are the commoners who just attend school here. There are the commuters who go to school here but don’t live on campus, and then there are the Greeks. Inside the groups, all the individuals lead different paths on their way to “success”. Whether it be becoming a doctor, firefighter, or a professional athlete, “success” is on the minds of the students.
All of these groups are divided and have very fine lines drawn between them. I know merely from being a student-athlete that we amongst the students are always trying to identify ourselves as the athletes. Each one of these social classes on campus will always stick together with their own kind if you will. If there is one thing that all these groups have in common it is that everyone is suffering from paying tuition, suffering from budget cuts, and everyone is having a hard time getting into the classes they need.
One of the issues that is brought to light from all of this is that more and more people are trying to go to college, but it is hard when the tuition is raised by that much. Also people are trying to graduate as hastily as possible and that is hard when students cannot get the necessary classes to continue in their education. It is also a hindrance to students who are trying to graduate at the quickest rate possible when the maximum amount of units a student is allowed to sign up for is capped at 15. At all schools, there are multiple social and economic issues that are brought onto the table. Issues of fitting in with the social groups that are formed on campus, and trying to afford the tuition and adding classes that a student needs to graduate while the California State University system is cutting more classes. It’s a very different scene on campus and it is clear to see all of these issues.
The university system is always going to share similarities. It will always have the students, and it will always have the faculty. These two feed off of each other because the students essentially pay for the faculty and staff’s paychecks, and the students are earning knowledge and intellect from the professors on campus. The issue is that the students are having a very rough time through their years at the school. It is getting more and more competitive to get into schools and once they are there, the journey is not any easier. All students feel the effect of the tuition raised. All students are struggling to fill their schedule with the classes that they actually need for their major. The people highest up at the schools are getting paid more than the brains they are graduating and those brains usually are going to have to pay student loans for the next years of their life out of college. 
BIBLIOGRAPHY
"CSUN : Student Affairs : CSUN Strategic Enrollment Management Plan - 2008 -2013."California State University, Northridge. Web. 12 Mar. 2012. <http://www.csun.edu/studentaffairs/sem/historyandproj.htm>.
"World Socialist Web Site." Budget Cuts Hit California State University. Web. 12 Mar. 2012. <http://www.wsws.org/articles/2012/feb2012/csun-f14.shtml>.